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Roschester, NY

Today I drooped by my daughters high school, she graduated in 2007, in support
of the student walkout. I now have hope for the future. Generation Z and the
Millennials, will change the world. This Boomer is happy and very proud of
them. Watch out America.. They are not giving up!

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Thanks :)

this story is incredable

I remember voting for this incredibly good little piece in the contest a month or two ago!
Still love it!

An intriguing well-written story. Loved the eerie feel that your words placed all throughout.

Thanks for the read :)

Hi Laura,

To start with, I loved the cover pic. Definite creepiness!

A little snippet of a piece, full of intrigue. Your last line says it all though.

Some tense issues, 'are' instead of 'were' that sort of thing.

Well done.

Bek :)

writing - look forward to more of your stories...Paula

This is very good, leaves you wondering at the end..very good indeed.

your friend,
zunaloy

Thanks :) I wasn't sure how it was going to be received...I'm glad you like it.