Strangers In The Fireplace

Von:
User: leshea
Strangers In The Fireplace
Christina had gotten use to the 1:15 a.m. wake up calls every Friday. Until now, a search through her condo for any intruders had always turned up empty. So what did the strange figures at the foot of her bed want?

This short story is an excerpt from a possible book series.

Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
lesliethompson

Very good, I liked it. However, I wouldn't have minded hearing a little of Christina's personal history at the beginning. Will be dropping by for part 2. Yay!

Wichtiger Beitrag
felixthecat

An intriguing read, Leshea...and you do "battle" scenes so well! When do we get to see part two? :)

Wichtiger Beitrag
momomarshmallow

Wow, I'm very impressed! I agree with rgabel. I really love the plot, and the way you wrote it. I can't wait to read more if you choose to write more!

Wichtiger Beitrag
leshea

Thank you rgabel for that wonderful comment! And thanks to everyone who took the time to read and comment!

Wichtiger Beitrag
Rgabel

I really like how you wrote the action scenes, clean, crisp and simple. I could actually envision them. You have a wonderful writing voice with good grammar and sentence structure. Also a active imagination. Please write more!

Wichtiger Beitrag
natasha

I just re-read this ... that's how much I enjoyed it at the first read. I hope that (you) L. Maxwell will soon be giving us more to read. Please don't leave us hanging in suspense!

Weitere Beiträge anzeigen
Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE