i enjoyed it.always a soft spot for sarcastic main character.
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Very good, I liked it. However, I wouldn't have minded hearing a little of Christina's personal history at the beginning. Will be dropping by for part 2. Yay!
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An intriguing read, Leshea...and you do "battle" scenes so well! When do we get to see part two? :)
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Wow, I'm very impressed! I agree with rgabel. I really love the plot, and the way you wrote it. I can't wait to read more if you choose to write more!
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Thank you rgabel for that wonderful comment! And thanks to everyone who took the time to read and comment!
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I really like how you wrote the action scenes, clean, crisp and simple. I could actually envision them. You have a wonderful writing voice with good grammar and sentence structure. Also a active imagination. Please write more!
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I just re-read this ... that's how much I enjoyed it at the first read. I hope that (you) L. Maxwell will soon be giving us more to read. Please don't leave us hanging in suspense!
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Amazing!! Hope to be able to write as well as you some day. :)
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