Please update this book I want to know what happens please...
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I haven't read it yet but I seem to like this one more
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First off I love your poem the rhythm is well placed and fluid. Very nice. This comment is just some tips ive learned over the years so take them or leave them it. So I noticed at the beginning of your chapters you point out the point of view you will be writing in, It is not necessary to do, the reader will pick up on it on their own. Except when you change the person’s P.O.V I would just call it by their name. but that’s... mehr anzeigen
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of course theres gunna be more, glad u like it
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chic i love it. but y does everybody make vamps emo? chic u best rite more soon
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i am working on it. i have school, so it takes me a while to type it. hope you enjoy!!
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