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small n precise..bang!!! love it!!!

They were nice, I actually loved them ...!!!! :-) :-)

LOVE IT ITS AWESOME READING OTHER BOOK!!!

the only thing i would say is its very short. i think u need 2 make it a bit more describtive, i like the idea, but i think u need more resistisance from Chole, after all James did murdr her ma, n i dnt think id fall in love wit him str8 away. personally. tht would b the only critasm, aprt from tht good :)

Sometimes i forget I am an Old Geezer. there was a Hostage situation in Helsinki during the 1972 Munich Olympic. the Hostages formed a kind of friendship with the ones that took them hostage, However the term is a knockoff of the "Stockholm Syndrome" that was it's original name, and came from a Hostage situation during a bank robbery in Stockholm.

I hope this clears it up for you. You can also Google Stockholm Syndrome if you want a better description.

Research if one of your best friends when you write, so keep up the good work, and don't neglect the research.

This is one really messed up girl.

Is she suffering from Helsinki syndrome?

keep writing, I'm reading the next one.

Taking into account your age, the current trends, and how I wrote at your age, I think you are a good story teller. You definitely are able to write in the moment and about emotions.
You will develop, you have the desire and drive to write about what is around you and this is good.
Now, to be the best writer you can be, it is time to start working a little harder. Go back and read some of your favorite books. Look how the story flows, starts with tension, then builds and resolves the issues. You start with the kidnapping and murder of her mom, then you move to the present, good, then to their repetitious relationship, then to a change in that. Good. Then suddenly we see a new character come in. Good, then you end it with no resolution. Hmmm, need to fix that.
I like the font. Love your book covers. You need to just mature your writing. You will and can be an even better writer, I know you can. Robynn

So much going on in this work of yours. On the surface and underneath your characters. certainly makes me want to read more! Keep writing! :)

hahaha! short but good

just sortin out Love by form have a gander at it!