I fell very bad
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very powerful. You do write well on subjects and i think with time as you grow older you will develop as a writer.
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very powerful. You do write well on subjects and i think with time as you grow older you will develop as a writer.
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I also agree with "countzero" it is a good story, and really drives the point home.
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I agree completley with "countzero"! It's a short story, yet when reading it I still had a wierd feeling of sympathy and loss in my gut.
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I agree completley with "countzero"! It's a short story, yet when reading it I still had a wierd feeling of sympathy and loss in my gut.
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Very dramatic for such a short piece. It conveyed the message very succinctly and the abrupt ending drove it home with a sledgehammer. Good Job!
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its good. update and tell me or i will never update my books
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