BookRix

I Love the book, so much that I am going to read anther

It is such perfect expression of love and longings and the days gone by. so nice and so finely presented.

I loved your use of parallelism and repetition in your poem. I also like that you don't actually feel a need to rhyme every single line which is cool, because poetry isn't just about rhyming. Anyway, you got your point across and touched me.
Liz

Sad but very honest portrayal of the feelings involved after losing a loved one.You deserve more stars.There is hope after grief.Please read;Of Darkness And Light,which deals with both loss and hope.