Crowned

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Crowned
When Odette Hackleford is abandoned at birth by her mother, Ruth, on accident, and is found by a woodsman miles away from any civilization, Odette, having taken the name Alex,
grows aware of her unique circumstances and sets out to seek her true family. Alone. From a baby to a beautiful girl, Odette finally finds her mother, but wonders, after all, if she even wants her.

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robbedbygreed

I can tell you have talent! Great job with the story!

However, I do have some critiques:

In the first sentence of the book you add

"the freezing air flowing through the crack under to door from the forest outside"

onto the end of the already long sentence. This is fine, but it looks like you made a spelling error. Of course after I read it several times I get what you're trying to say, but a reader should be able to pick up... mehr anzeigen

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eachna

I love the way this is going and I think this could be very possible if you write more. Plz do 2. I can't wait, its so well written.

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