BookRix

Thank you for your opinion on my book. I was just hoping that people would feel the emotions I was trying to get out. :)

Yeah, it is the same children's writer! I decided to go outside of my regular zone for this one. I say 'reality' because the scenes she invisions in her mind (fantasy, ecstasy) are what she wants and the end is what is real, what she is living and experiencing in her actual life...her 'reality'. Thanks for the kind words :) I was a bit nervous posting this one because it is kind of 'out there' for me. I have a lot of this kind of stuff...and more rolling around in my head. I am working on a few more (outside of the children's stories realm)...so we will see what comes of it when I get it all together. :)

I had to double check you were the same writer of the children's story I so loved.

The emotions can readily be embraced and that was one of the most sensual love scenes I've read in a long, long time...the character lapsing into melancholy is so sad.

Being one of optimistic outlook, I would see the ending as more of a self fulfilling prophesy than a reality.

All I can say is great job!...p

Thank you for your feedback. I did change the rating and made it viewable to all. I am glad you felt the emotions I was trying to convey, that you felt her desires, her wants, her needs, and the deflating of her fantasy as she came back to her reality...her nightmare, if you will. I often doubt my ability to get the reader to fully embrace the character and their emotions. To actually feel as if they were the person in the story...living their life, feeling their joys, sorrow, passion, or what ever emotion the character is feeling.
And, yes, daisies are beautiful...but to most, they pale in comparison to a lush bouquet of roses (personally, I prefer a simple Iris or Water Lilly...but to each his/her own...right?). Thanks again, Laz!!

Wow, such emotion.
First of all...it is very sensual, beautiful and sad...but it should not be X-rated. This must be read by all.
At first I felt the love, the yearning, then the sad dissapointment of your reality. I'm sure many of your readers can easily identify with such emotions.
And....daisies are beautiful.
Laz