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Each one was beautifully rendered. Very nice poet!

i raelly like your book its good

Koyel, the poems I read in your book(Muse) are better than the ones in your 'Nook.'

I hope you don't take my words lightly but there is a difference that I noticed.
There must be a story behind your writing those four poems. Search yourself for a clue. It might open up a new understand of poetry to you.And how you feel as you write.

In 'Muse' the poems vary. That is a good thing. Some words are repeated and the sky never seems to be 'blue' or grass never is 'green.' You obviously are influenced by certain words when keeping things simple can have a dramatic effect.

In ' Derelict' the first line is flat when read out aloud. A line like that is termed 'easy' when it might be written 100 times better with the slightest of attention. I'd suggest:

"You lie neglected, abandoned too," and then continue onto the second line. I'd suggest 'someone's' becomes 'another's' which read aloud sounds more direct.What are your thoughts?

Hope the above helps a little. Time is the biggest constraint in reviewing stories or poems. I hope you understand.

Best wishes and keep writing, revising and editing.

Cleveland
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Thanks for sharing some different types of poems with other poets. I enjoyed your work. I had forgotten about the cinquain, I haven't tried one recently, but I might try one again.

If you can, I'd like for you to read my poetry book, My Reflections.

I really liked your poem about the apples.

Very lovely work. Touching and so well written. What a wonderful read. Best regads, Rena Kay

eloquent and tender. thank you.

Again, you show knowledge of different verse forms and the ability to choose the right subject for the right form. I admire this a great deal, especially as you convey real emotions in your poems so that they are never stilted or overformal.

Very nicely done! I love the cover too! Great job!

Very nicely written! I really enjoy your writing style. You have my vote!