BookRix

At last...the money-trap's coast.

You are still such a master at imagery, my friend.
Love this "new" book.

wonderful poems ,good poetic ideas very well expressed...Mari

Thank you for your invitation to read your poetry. You must be well read to use the words penury and tawdry. Not used commonly, but I love reading them. I love ferris wheels so really like the cover and the poem. But I felt your emotions the most in the poem about your mother. Nice job, write more. Robynn

great stuff , well done , well writen

I like thid one of those submitted, I can feel the atmosphere.
Bluedragon

I am hard put to pick a favorite because as you said you are depicting different emotions - I know one of those ladies in the last poem and totally agree that until man accepts the dark there cannot be the light. More poems are always welcome from your pen...Paula

I liked the Terza Rima poem best.

Will you be adding moe to this book later?

--cupideros

Very beautiful poems and very creative choice of words. Love them all but my fave would be your terza rima one :)

Great, Koyel,
"women adorned by tawdry jewels.....stuffed like a chicken roast." that's funny, I can just picture that.
Laz

I like them all.