Love it! hilarious cant wait for future updates. Great job so far so good.
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Loving this so far, keep up the good work!
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This is really awesome. You're a great writer. :)
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hope you keep reading. Thanks.
I love the plot & main framework of this story. With a quick edit you could make this story positively glow.
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Thanks for the feedback. Are there any editing tricks I could steal from you? or what do you think my problems are?
There are a few pesky typos rearing their heads, but don't worry many writers, including myself, get them. Just 'stomp on them'.
Please, remember writing is very subjective & depends on the individuals tastes & morals. So please, feel free to accept or ignore my tips.
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ThankS much! I needed a great take on it. An analytic one. I will sure take your advise. If you come across anything that doesn't sit well with you lemmie know since I am working so hard on it to feel publishing material.
i like still a virgin, great storyling and amazing plot :)
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aww, thanks. I am sure it loves you too.
:P i hope so :) may i send a friend request now? 8-) :P