I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on N0velStar.
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I just finished reading your book and couldn't help feeling a bit hungry for more detail. It was a very nice story but there are many holes that needed filling to my opinion. For example giving more background information on the protagonist and taking more time to maybe describe what the room looked like, how long ago was her grandma's fight fought. Also a spell check would have made the story easier to read. The synopsis was... mehr anzeigen
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