That book had me day dreaming at the end that was amazing damnnnnnnnn!
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Hi Joeparente! From your picture (call me prejudice in a way as to whom I think might enjoy my writings!!) :) I thought that that one might be a bit much for you.. that's why I suggested Amnesty!! LOL! However, I'm glad you took a chance on La La! It is an excellent story.. But the setting kinda calls for the intensity.. I'm sorry.. kinda.. but for some reason that story lived in me just that way and I had to get it out and I... mehr anzeigen
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Strong story. I was not taken back by the language. In fact it fit the story well. The overuse of 'ass' was a little much. Not because of the word just the overuse of it.
Good story and it held my interest. Dialog was excellent along with imagination. Congratulations on a work well done./joeparente
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