If this was based on a True Story, Kenny . . . I am afraid . . . VERY AFRAID ! !
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Hey Kenny,
Enjoyed the read... Right along with the genre we both enjoy. You can definitely turn it into a novel!
Kathy
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I enjoyed your tale and voted for you. I thought it was very interesting and entertaining. Keep writing. Thank you.
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I found the start of the story to go slowly; it wasn't drawing me in. Add some action to the intro.
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Hi!
Thanks for the feedback on "Remember The Rain"; I do appreciate your taking the time in both reading & suggesting!
Have a great week-
Kenny
Thanks for submitting your work. It was an enjoyable read.
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Hi!
Thanks for taking the moment to share some kind words with me about "Remembering The Rain". It gives me a good deal of pleasure to know that someone read it! ;-)
Thanks again,
Kenny Peters
Great story! It leaves me wanting more I got to have more!
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could you add the word "head" when talking about the dog looking at David and cocked? It will clarify that sentence. Good job
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I really appreciate the feedback - heading over to the editing function now ;-)
Have a great weekend!
Kenny
Interesting story. Shades of "Ghost".
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Thanks for the comment on Remembering The Rain. It's unfortunate; the older we get the more nothing is completely original anymore. That's either a sign of many creative minds or just symbolic of the absorbic nature of our society. Either way can be hopelessly pleasant!
Thanks again,
Kenny
Awesome! You rock Kenny!!!
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Ms. Cathy!
Thank you sweets for coming by this and reading the story. I'm hoping to use this as part of the launchpad to the next phase of life ;-) Someday I'll find my way...
Love ya,
Kenny
Hi Donna-
Thank you so much for writing your very kind thoughts about Remembering The Rain. It is very nice to know that this is getting read! I have had some very nice responses so far and I'm keeping my fingers crossed! Please feel free to share the book link with anyone you... mehr anzeigen
Hi Donna-
Thank you so much for writing your very kind thoughts about Remembering The Rain. It is very nice to know that this is getting read! I have had some very nice responses so far and I'm keeping my fingers crossed! Please feel free to share the book link with anyone you would like; if they are willing to vote, the contest is through the 15th of October!
Again, thanks and have a fantastic weekend!
Kenny