Remembering The Rain

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Remembering The Rain
My entry into the Rain Stories contest, this is the story of David, discovering what a day of rain means...

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rain, ghosts, kenny peters
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zukigirl

If this was based on a True Story, Kenny . . . I am afraid . . . VERY AFRAID ! !

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katsawyer61

Hey Kenny,

Enjoyed the read... Right along with the genre we both enjoy. You can definitely turn it into a novel!

Kathy

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donnamyoung

I enjoyed your tale and voted for you. I thought it was very interesting and entertaining. Keep writing. Thank you.

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kennypeters

Hi Donna-

Thank you so much for writing your very kind thoughts about Remembering The Rain. It is very nice to know that this is getting read! I have had some very nice responses so far and I'm keeping my fingers crossed! Please feel free to share the book link with anyone you... mehr anzeigen

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nisamsuzi

I found the start of the story to go slowly; it wasn't drawing me in. Add some action to the intro.

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kennypeters

Hi!

Thanks for the feedback on "Remember The Rain"; I do appreciate your taking the time in both reading & suggesting!

Have a great week-
Kenny

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bookmix

Thanks for submitting your work. It was an enjoyable read.

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kennypeters

Hi!

Thanks for taking the moment to share some kind words with me about "Remembering The Rain". It gives me a good deal of pleasure to know that someone read it! ;-)

Thanks again,
Kenny Peters

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juneurump

could you add the word "head" when talking about the dog looking at David and cocked? It will clarify that sentence. Good job

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kennypeters

I really appreciate the feedback - heading over to the editing function now ;-)

Have a great weekend!

Kenny

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Gelöschter User

Interesting story. Shades of "Ghost".

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kennypeters

Thanks for the comment on Remembering The Rain. It's unfortunate; the older we get the more nothing is completely original anymore. That's either a sign of many creative minds or just symbolic of the absorbic nature of our society. Either way can be hopelessly pleasant!

Thanks again,
Kenny

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italgal516

Awesome! You rock Kenny!!!

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kennypeters

Ms. Cathy!

Thank you sweets for coming by this and reading the story. I'm hoping to use this as part of the launchpad to the next phase of life ;-) Someday I'll find my way...

Love ya,
Kenny

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