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Hi Kenz,
Your work displays quite a bit of anguish and despair. Sometimes that's a good thing if you want to convert your piece into a full-blown short story. Your character could find someone that shows her how to find the "goodness" in other people and the telling of that process would be her journey. Just a thought. Keep writing, I enjoyed this.
Your friend in writing,
Augustus.