BookRix

Im not good at poetry but you, you seem to be amazing i loved it. it was a work of art thank you for sharing it

You did very well trying to portray the meaning of being a warrior. I encourage you to keep writing and developing your skills. You had some good imagery, and did fairly well on your rhythm. With some practice, you can be even better.

You can even add to this book if you wish. I know you have more poems. I liked reading this!

While I don't write any poetry myself so I can't comment on form or style, it was a very enjoyable read! Keep up the hard work! :D