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Ryle is assertive, stubborn, and maybe even a little arrogant. He's also sensitive, brilliant, and has a total soft spot for Lily, but Ryle's complete aversion to relationships is disturbing.
https://myfreekindle.blogspot.com/2017/08/colleen-hoover-it-ends-with-us.html
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your story was good but u should've written more
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My one problem is the title. It'd be like writing a Jake and Nessie book and calling it Twilight. Stephanie Meyer already wrote (and published half) of her Midnight Sun, which if you haven't read it (though I highly doubt it) is Twilight from Edward's pov.
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It was really interesting but too short. I wish yiu had written more.
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u just twisted the whole thing like mad!!! still good...ur impression of the relationship of jacob black and renesmee cullen is rather accurate but some parts are rather exaggerative, u know...
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midnight sun is not about jacob and nessie its about edwards point of view.midnight sun is twilight retold in edwards point of view.
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i normally dont read books tht r pose 2 b remakes or something like them of twilight, (luv twilight!) but i saw a coment saying tht it was funny...and tht coment was completly correct!! lmfao!! XD
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It should have been longer and it was good but if this was longer i whould have been better