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This Story was very SEXY ! lmao , nice touch . I thinik you should have actually went into description at times instead of going "..." because the readers didnt really get a chance to know the main character , they didnt really get to know SHy, all we know is she's very sex crazed & she works at the investment place, u have to give the readers a chance to decide whether they like the main character or not. they decide this by reading how the main character reacts in situations, the fact that u didnt really go into description in those situations.. the main character was like a blank face to me.((Dont take offense to my criticism))

finally a black book like this. Girl get on with your bad self... hehe

Thank you very much

or do another one, I don't care but that book was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!