what did i just do

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what did i just do
this book is a little like the percy jackson series but its about a girl named tori and she find out shes a demi god in fact she is the daughter of hephaestus but she is not ugly she is quite beautiful but she is also the daughter of poseidon how did that happen no one know and everyone cares

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greek gods, love, power
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leo1556

so great so far u know i love the Percy Jackson series but he goes out with Annabeth so i wouldn't think he would be kissing another girls hand by the way were is Annabeth in this story but honestly this book is sick but hey she can still go out with Alec kinda like Selena and Beckendorf it was sad because both died but who cares but if shes also the daughter of Hephaestus so her and Alec seeing as they like each other could be the cutest couple

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kkkkoolkat11

thanks I will keep writing and my friend is helping me with my grammar thank you again

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writingmum

Look's like you're just starting out. That's okay. It doesn't matter that your writing lacks the correct grammar and punctuation. You're giving it a go, which is great by me.

And there's a lot of fan fiction on BookRix, so if you want to continue writing along the lines of Percy Jackson then keep doing it, if just to practice.

Don't let negative comments make you not write. You can write whatever you like, and even if it's not... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

Katie, if you want to write books, you'll have to like grammar and spelling. It's what makes a book. People don't like to read, one long sentence that doesn't have a beginning or an end and doesn't have Capital letters and so on. Yours could be the story of the year, but if people can't read it, it's useless to write it.

Big words are fine if you like them like that. Don't take this badly, but learn from it.

Tanya

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snickers.2

this sucks. you should not even bother to write. i mean seriously it makes me want to kill myself. oh and it was like a total ripoff of the percy jackson serious. BITCH.

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kkkkoolkat11

K thanks for the advise i guess im sorta blind sO I like big letters and btw in 12 give me a break i dont like spelling Or grammar and im trying

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omgipockii

I'm not trying to be mean or anything but the words are way too big and I can read it way across my room...and I agree with starkwolf. Needs to work on grammar and punctuaton. :)

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starkwolf

Not to be mean, but I really think you should work on grammar and punctuation.

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