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was fun and clever, Kathy!

You're right! Need a healthy respect for money!

Good luck! Petra :))

Hello k4thcake,
I intercepted your transmission. Robots do not understand money, so your poetic signal was helpful in updating my shareware. Since you like poetry, perhaps you might enjoy my robotic poems if you have time.
Good luck in this contest!
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robottina

Hi Kathy,
Your poem has a nice meter to it, and it captures issues that almost everyone can relate to. The ending felt a bit rushed, though...maybe you could add a few more lines to better transition to the end where you bring up the importance of loved ones over money? Good job overall.
Good luck!
Incognito

It's ture I see many other in that I give that it 10 star's