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this is a good piece :)

This story was a good example of how many women get used by men. Women think the man "loves" them when it is nothing more than just sex. Thank you for writing.

Herschel,
Thank youuu kindly (:

Hey guys (:

Thank you for taking the time to read my short story! I'm glad that you liked it! I'm working on more of it now and will post it when it's ready! (:

That was so raw. You got my vote. I really wish there were more books like this in this contest. Please check out my entry, Lucky Penny, weird name I know, but I think it's ok.
Hope to read more from you soon.
Peace,
Jon

hi, I've just voted for your short story... It made me feel all of your anger... or, at least, Sara's.
I liked the honesty with which you write.

Deb

Thank you Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. (:

I think all of us, at least most of us are a "Sara". I know I am- same feelings of rejection, of being not wanted, and wanting only some one to love me. I can feel the emotion in reading this 'eye opening' book to the soul of Sara. Whatever happens to me, I am responsible.
It is just one hell of a book, and I enjoyed every word. Truth or fiction, I don't know. All I know is that I could have loved Sara.

Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Travel Stories".

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