BookRix

I like it, but why it is separated, it is hard to read it like that :(

get interesting, i LOVE your books^_^

please write more

now this is really good

I want to know what happens next.

you have a good idea but you need to reread your book the grammar is irregular and needs some changes

They meet one day, the next they are kissing, the next they are in love. Reality doesnt quite work that way and when you write those things in a book they have to flow better. I like the story line, just needs to slow down some and take more time.

It's moving along ok.But you shouldn't have Jacob get punched. Too rough. Maybe pushed or just thrown out. AND yes too soon to think about marriage...lol

Your book is ok but you are going too fast. You need to slow it down and let your characters get to know each other a little better before you get them straight into wanting to marry each other.

i love this story <3