I love your story! It's so expressive and makes you feel like you're living in that moment and it's just beautiful. However, a bit tweaking on the tenses and repeating of words could really help, especially if you're talking about the same place. I loved the book, good job
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Hi! The book shows originality. Especially that beginning scene with Jimmy... I realize it's not a cliché Sci-Fi novel. Love it!
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THat was one of the best moments in my life. Your book shows promise... wich is really hard to find around here!
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You're headed in a good start. Keep it up. :)
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The Perfect Utopia is a solid beginning and it works for the story.
I'm interested to read more.
Thanks a lot!!
Real interesting thought and I shared it on my face book account also :)
Thank you very much!
Really good but can only get sample.
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you can go on amazon, it says buy, but it's on for 0.00 so it's free really
haven't got an account and it's not available on the british app store yet
I've seen it with the british website, or itunes o barnes and nobles.
odd. it just doesn't want to work.
Nice work you have a real talent for writing keep it up
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Thank you very much!
Omg it is absolutely beautiful. I loved everything. Good work.
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That's very kind of you, thanks!!!!
An interesting, futuristic piece which probably had been tugging to get out out the writer's mind for a while! Exactly what my twelfth graders and I would sit and talk about. I love the clever weaving of the 'Pangea' theory with modern day conspiracies theories which surround the emergence of AIDS, ebola, zika and other diseases as a means of population control! Keep on writing, Bella
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I agree.
Thanks very much Vellie ! I'm still working on editing it, I just wanted to see what people would think about it first before adjusting it, thanks a lot! And thanks Soulfulwriter too! :)
no problem, anytime (iron sharpens iron!)
Very interesting. congrats on an excellent, different story.
R.F. Clifton
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Thank you very much!
Very interesting. I would like to read more.
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I will attempt to download the full version when I get home.
Thank you very much, I'm glad, that's great thanks
It should be available if you click buy with amazon or itunes as it's 0.00
Thank you very much! Still working on it :)