BookRix

I read this book and was touched by the story and interested in a truly unique persepctive from that of a super baby. Big problem though with keeping the english verbs in your sentences all in the same tense ie. Past, Present, Future. You slipped up in this area of grammar. You have to keep the tense of a verb in each sentence exactly the same to indicate whether you speak of the past, present, or future and it should stay one of them most of the time. Some words I didn't understand and suspect they have been misspelled which spoils the sense of the story. There aren't that many of them but you would be wise to fix that along with the verb tenses agreeing with each other.