The cover page represents the typical south indian story
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As usual your writing is exquisite . The story reads as poetry and love. very nice./joeparente Star1
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I do understand your concern Kalai. But then, you limit your skills within a narrow circle when u can expand it. Think of other people too. (for example, a sportsman trying to come up despite all the odds loaded against him, a scientist's life, a police constable, a good and honest person taken for a ride and being cheated by people whom he believes the most, etc.,)
It's my expecting more from you that suggested you to stop... mehr anzeigen
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Though the flow is good and the story is good, isn't it time you think beyond the bus numbered AYI2135 and writing about the crew? Do not limit yourself and let it your imagination go beyond the MTC bus to other locales too.
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Thanks for your comments. It is true and I accept that I must think beyond MTC buses. I could not avoid thinking about hardships of people who are in constant interaction with the society and they know about the latest vibration in the society. Probably it may be due to my... mehr anzeigen