BookRix

I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on N0velStar.

This is such a sweet romantic short story. I like your characters and the way you narrate it. It may be simple, but lovely. Good luck!

There is an innocence and a naivety to this story that makes it wonderful. The blooming of gentle love. I enjoyed your descriptions of everyday life and their brief encounter on the bus. I vote for this because you can see your talent in the flow of this story. Robynn