READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left... mehr anzeigen
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I LOVED it! It made me cry :'( It made me think why a person abuses his mate when he loves her deeply inside... You should have mentioned it too...But I still liked it :)
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WAS A VERY UPSETTING STORY. I CRIED. IT A CRYING SHAME A MAN HAS TO HIT A WOMAN.
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WAS A VERY UPSETTING STORY. I CRIED. IT A CRYING SHAME A MAN HAS TO HIT A WOMAN.
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awwww that's so sad he loved her and he always will how cute!!!!that's also terrible that she died like that!
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yeah the main point i was aiming for was that he had known but he did nothing till all was too late. And I wanted someone to see the excuse most women use when asked why they never leave the man hurting them... Plus the romance was just cause I thought it would have a little more impact
hey i like this short story its really good and i feel sorry for lily nad how she died
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