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ok thank you for the advice im going to get right on that i was never very good with puncuation but thanks for the comment
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well it has potential even if it is very predictable, but you are missing a lot of punctuation and have made a lot of spelling mistakes. please fix the mistakes before writing on. they make it very hard to read
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