Unshed Tears

Tales of Octavia, Chapter II Von:
User: tophat
Unshed Tears
Within the walls of an ancient city, Octavia finds herself in a battle for the right to live. If she fails to pick a fight with the Spartan general however, her life will become forfeit upon her return.


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "Tales of Octavia"
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Bad Omen
Tales of Octavia Book 1
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Unshed Tears
Tales of Octavia, Chapter II
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Historical, action, Sci-Fi
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felixthecat

Once again, I loved it. The temporary fall of Octavia, the Spartan background, the battle scene with the teenagers. I truly think this is going to be a great novel upon completion.
If I had one complaint...a minor one...it would be the exposition in the first page. I would rather have seen the explanation of the Disruptors narrated; woven slowly (or more slowly) into the scenes forthcoming.
But Unshed Tears follows well on the heels of Bad Omen.

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tophat

You must be a glutton for punishment.
I'll be looking forward to hearing what you think.
Thanks to all who have read so far.
:D

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tophat

I'll be typing very soon now; just as soon as i have finished a promo.

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tophat

Aw, i'm getting embarrased.
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Thanks so much for reading, and i'm so glad to have surprised you. Your advice is duly noted and taken on board, and you know i love you right back. :D

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gooduklady

This is not my usual genre of choice, but since I so admire and like you, I decided to give it a shot. Surprising myself - I enjoyed it immensely. Your words brought the scenes to life and I could see the action emblazoned on the page. You have a wonderfully heroic and strong female protagonist (hooray) and I am interested to see what further adventures ensue.

To pass on a tip I received for one of my own books - go through... mehr anzeigen

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tophat

Thanks guys and girl. I'm glad that i am keeping things interesting.
Thankyou so much for your comments and support. :)

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paulashene

all the good f words - I agree with Meli on the surface but the beginning of this has more to it - smacks of Illuminati and puppet masters...

no slow fading in this episode.... bright flashing and a worthy sister to Wonder Woman!

Fantastic work Kade! love it!..p

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