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its pretty short but its alright make another part please but a little longer
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I have to admit, that is a pretty random book!;) I think if you made it a bit more complex e.g what the girls reaction was when she found out what she was. And what the room, her parents look like. And maybe a little bit of info on the main character like how her life has been up to now etc And if you think of a good plot and write a bit more i think you could make a good book
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