I loved this story. Very creative & captivating!!!
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Enjoyed this story especially for its finish..just desserts comes to mind...again a save and vote...Paula
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''Timothy continued thinking about birds ans dreaming about birds''
Nice story ,nice portrait.
You got my vote.
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Thanks! Please spread the word.
I've just voted for your book. The boy's strategy for survival in a dysfunctional family is highly feasible. Countless mothers have probably been forced to stand by and helplessly watch that kind of cruelty.
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Very true. It is a sad situation, but those abused physically and emotionally fall into a state of helplessness. I think only dramatic events allow for change in such situations.
Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".
The Librarian
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Yes, just desserts. In life it seems that the bad guys just get away. In a way, this is just catharsis.