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I had to come back and keep reading :) Once again, please consider publishing this or entering it into a contest.

it's over a month later and I am reading the update...I'm going crazy thanks to the suspense. Judy, this is probably some of your best work yet. The scenes, the imagery, the characters...honestly...this is an amazing story. Enter this in a contest somewhere.

I am enjoying this sooo much. Waiting and wondering. Brilliant!

OMG - this is amazing stuff, Judy. I was so disappointed when the story ended where it did...I was hoping for completion. But I expect you will have to write a lot more pages to make this a full length novel.

This is my pick of the year! Oftimes when I see "112 pages" my heart sinks. Can I really get through all of this? Do I want to? I didn't even notice the amount of pages, so engrossed was I in your characterization of the handsome young man, "Ghost", who has an other-worldly quality to him.

I can easily picture this as a movie. You painted a picture with words and they all stood out in my mind very clearly and in living color. Start submitting, Judy. You deserve to be a superstar.

Your styles are so different - yet each unique and riveting. "The Perfect Criminal" is one of your very best works and I urge everyone to read it. As Patrick and others have said below, you really fleshed out the characters, yet moved swiftly along with the story line so that it never lagged.

I entreat you to message me when you have more!

What an intriguing character you dreamt up in "Ghost"! Damn, you left me turning that last page again and again, hoping I'd somehow missed the next scene!!!!

You populated this great story with such real and fleshed out characters, all the way from Jimmy Olsen and Perry White to the vicious guard in solitary. The scenes, too, between Michael and Victoria were perfect. Well-done!

All in all I rank this right at the top of my favorites here:)

BRILLIANT. When you post up what happens next, please send out a message. I am eager to learn more about Michael and Gabriel. And something about Veronica doesn't feel right...it might just be me though.

I thoroughly enjoy your writing and I'm on board, and want to read more. Good job.