READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
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Okay. It's just WOWOWOW. I am kinda scared now tbh as I'm alone at home lol. I felt like I was being transported there. This is so short but horror at it's best.
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Thank you sooo much! I got the idea for this from a recurring nightmare, actually.
Hey, if you still want some horror but with a teensy bit of humor, here's another one. It's a bit longer but not much:
https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-judy-colella-deception/
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Awe you're welcome. And thanks for the suggestion. I will read it for sure :)
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READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
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Dude, don't spam my book page. If you want to read my story and leave a comment, great, but don't use my page for your stuff, even if you think it's appropriate because the story is horror. That's really disrespectful.
I'm very sorry. I had to! Sorry if it was disrespectful.
I'm not a dude
"Dude" is just an expression that applies to both genders, and no, you didn't "have" to, unless you're, like, two years old or something. I would hope you're capable of more self-control than that. And since I obviously have no intention of playing along with garbage like this,... mehr anzeigen
READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
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Wow!! Scary!!
Love your writing style.
Great book Judy ^_^
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it, and I appreciate you taking the time both to read and comment - that means more than anything to me as writer. Thank you, thank you, thank you! ')
Your welcome. :)
Ur writings are really good.
And the best thing about u is that u respond to every Comment. :D
You're so kind! I know that everyone is busy with their own things, so when they take the time to leave me a comment, I want them to know how much it's appreciated. It's a kind of blessed symmetry, one that keeps us from taking others for granted.
Again, thank you! =)
Pretty good suspense build up. Funny how something so simple can rattle your nerves
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Thanks! You're right about that - it's the simple, visceral stuff. I got the idea from my dreams - I always know when a dream is about to take a nasty turn because I find myself in a house at dusk, and when I try to turn on the light, nothing happens. Shudder!
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It's odd horror so far, however it had some features which were very interesting.
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Lol, thanks. ')
It made me feel I was in a horror movie or in a nightmare, when your conscience or something in your head, sends you warning signs and you stay paralyzed by fear or ignore those signs for the curiosity.
I really liked, and only left me thinking that there in the dark.? and I relate to the image cover page and that gave me more scared .... OMG.. !!
!! Please you have to do another book.
Thanks to you, it was great .. !!
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I'm blown away by your encouraging words - thank you sooo much! This was my first attempt at horror and was based on one of my recurring nightmares.
Thanks again, especially for taking the time not only to read, but to leave a comment. You're wonderful! =D
I think this is kind of a coninsidence because lastnight I woke up hearing things fall in my room and when I fell back to sleep it would happen again two hours later, mind you I have exams all this week, and I was up untill two. When I got up for school, I took a shower and looked to make sure that nothing fell, guess what, there was absolutly nothing out of place, and you could call me crazy, but I know it was in my room, it... mehr anzeigen
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Creepy, dude! Huh.
yeah it actually is... I do like the book too.
Oh, cool! Thanks!
np :)
I love your flow....I find myself wanting the journey to continue for a little while longer. Take care, Danny...
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Do you understand what our book pages are for? They're where you leave helpful comments about the writer's book, make suggestions, point out typos, and generally work with the author. What they are not, is a place to post your personal stuff. That's really disrespectful.
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Do you understand what our book pages are for? They're where you leave helpful comments about the writer's book, make suggestions, point out typos, and generally work with the author. What they are not, is a place to post your personal stuff. That's really disrespectful.
Okay, mini-rant over, lol. For the record, I've ignored literally hundreds of these (various versions are all over the place), and I'm still here. I started seeing them when I was in elementary school, and while some of my classmates enjoyed the "thrill" of thinking maybe it could be real, most of us laughed it off - and we're all healthy, happy, and... yeah, old, lol.
You can post this "Read or Die" tale on your profile, by the way - that would be fine. You should tell us something about yourself while you're at it, invite people to become friends with you, and discover others who enjoy this sort of thing. I mean, let's face it: there's something irresistible about tales of Slender Man, vampires, ghosts, and chupacabras. Since you seem to like these tales (when I was a kid, the one about Johnny and his missing liver was a favorite for sleep-overs), maybe you could try your hand at writing an original one and posting it here. I promise I'll read it.
In the meantime, please don't be offended if I delete your post since it doesn't really have anything to do with my book. Thanks for understanding - and I hope you write something awesome and creepy! You'll get lots of reads.
All the best to you!