Intruder

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Intruder

The house was huge - six bedrooms, five baths - and was situated on six lovely acres of land. So why was it being sold for only $20,000.00? Something wasn't right, but how could anyone pass up an opportunity like that?

Of course, it wasn't entirely vacant...


Stichwörter: 
Haunted house, Humor, Speculation
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storyteller4

Just read Intruder - a good one with a twist. A sassy woman with a bible and great wit. good humor - Malcom Cavell you are not, just an intruder. Good Halloween preview. thank you Judy.

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judycolella

Lol, thanks, Janice! It was fun to write! 'D

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MaryMorrison

Great read! love it!

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judycolella

Wow, thank you so much! I'm always surprised when someone notices one of my strange little stories, and always appreciative when the person takes a moment to leave feedback, too. I needed something to make me smile today, and your kind comment did the trick. 'D

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felixthecat

So entertaining, Judy. That wit you possess is spread like ectoplasm over every enjoyable page. Loved the Gideons ending, too:)

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judycolella

Thank you, Pat! I had a ridiculous amount of fun writing it, but wasn't sure about the end and was considering changing it. But your feedback, which as always is kind and smile-inducing, has made me decide to leave it as is.

Hug!

felixthecat

Print it:)

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