Please update soon, I love how it is turning out so far!
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I really love your ability to weave language in a way that touches the mind and heart. Well done as always....Take care, Danny.
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Thank you, my friend. You are most kind. ')
Hi Judy, I came across your name in the Coffee Shop post, so thought I'd give your book a quick read. Your writing is good - direct and to the point. I like the way you start with the details. Lately I've been having trouble figuring out if I'm approaching storytelling in the right way. You certainly are approaching it quite well. Could you give a quick read of my work (modern romance) and see if something is missing?
It was... mehr anzeigen
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Wow, thank you! This is my first attempt at writing a mystery novel, so I'm greatly encouraged that the beginning got your interest.
I'd be delighted to read your story! I have to run a few errands and take my daughter to the doctor, but when I get back, reading your story will... mehr anzeigen
I enjoyed it for the most part though the starting sentences didn't really pull me in so I would consider rewriting them at some point. In particular I can't wait for it to continue because the description of the private investigator reminded me of the reimagining of Sherlock Holmes as a P.I.
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I just realized something. The whole point of the scene isn't the scene itself, but to introduce the main character, Gargoyle. I was going to put one of those asterisk divider things after the last sentence and begin another section in which the reader meets him. Without that... mehr anzeigen
No problem and I don't see why I wouldn't be able to, just make sure to let me know when you update it. Also on a side note I will be uploading an edited version of Killing's The Only Solution soon, as well as two more poems in the Poetry of Følelser.
Awesome - I look forward to reading them!
Thank you! I have so many things going on right now, I haven't had time to update this, but others have been asking me to do the same, so as soon as I can, I'll get back to it. I really appreciate your encouraging feedback! ')