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This is good. Not much scary but the twist and turns are amazing. Tbh I'd die if something like that will happen to me lol.XD

After all, let's delete little doubts, shall we?

In my country Halloween goes in the light, so far take it like not dark, but and not and night somewhere in the middle,... Yup in the middle!

As second, it was kind of weird story, going in the unknown and uknown and as much you deeper go as more details for something else come... what's happening with the monster... who was he???!?
Why unlock? Not Lock?
After all I don't see If I was a victim, why I could unlock the door?!?!
I should lock it,?!?

Thank you for that! Your encouraging words brightened my day considerably. When my kids were younger, they read the Goosebumps books, and sometimes I'd read them, too, to make sure the stories weren't going to freak them out too badly. It's been years now since I last read one, so I was hoping my attempt would successfully imitate at least the essence of Stine's work. Your kind comment tells me my memory didn't fail me too much in this regard - thanks again!

Enjoyed your story and the twists and turns you design into every page. Most of all I liked your style. And you embodied the spirit of the challenge by keeping the story to kiddos and keeping the action flowing. Thanks, kept me reading to the end. C...

Thank you for saving this to your favorites! Wow! I am honored, my friend, yes I am!

Thank you for your extremely kind words! What a wonderful comment - I can't tell you how much that means. Sometimes (like all writers, I think), after reading the works of so many talented contributors on this website, I wonder if my own efforts are even worth making, but then I get something like this, and I think, "Yay! I really am doing something worth neglecting the dishes for!" Of course, the dishes do get done eventually...

Anyhow, thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely, encouraging comment - you're the best!

Which translates to enjoyable reading. You not only have the gift of forming a well thought out sentence but you also have the gift of story telling. Those two things combined make just about anything you produce a pleasure to read. You could easily become one of my favorite authors. I love how you use the "twist" in a lot of your stories. Somehow you write it so it isn't predictable. Your sense of humor is usually present in all your writing, even posts. Another gift... Thanks Judy for sharing another great story with us.

Wow, Chris - thank you very, very much! I read your comment right after I woke up and it made me smile. What a great way to start my day!

You have my heart & a definite vote.
Chris

im just scraping the surface of this website and if this is what im up against its gonna be hard, but theres just one question, what else was in the cake?