Behind Blue Eyes

The Who Von:
Behind Blue Eyes

It's a typical night in the Thirsty Unicorn, the bar where Jason works, listening to the woes and tears of his customers as he pours out liquid amnesia. Typical, except for one man with disturbing eyes.


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gooduklady

I am a little late to the party but better late than never, right?

Another incredible short - delivered with style and suspense.

Loved it!

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bluemermaid66

Dude!!!! That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

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guidedgal

There were so many ways this story could have gone.. I love the twist at the end! Leaving us with our mouth open!!! :)

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queenguinevere97

I love this song, but I wouldn't have been able to turn it into this suspenseful amazing, story that you have!
Good luck in the Sing A Song v.2 Contest.
-me ;P

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RebeckDawn

I thought to myself, "I love that song," but I assumed it had nothing to do with it, until I saw your sub title, "The Who." I love The Who and I think that song is so beautiful and sad. I love your story - I had no idea where it was going and the ending really surprised me. The somewhat cryptic dialogue from the man drinking at the bar just added to the general feel of the story.

I really enjoyed it - great job Judy!

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felixthecat

I had no idea why this story was written...at first. Why some of the lines were in bold. Familiar lines, but other than the mention of Crystal Gayle's great song...they eluded me.
And yet, I was once again entranced by the storyline; how you have this ability to sustain pace and flow and in this case, tension.
I find it remarkable that you were able to use the various phrases drawn out of The Who's classic song. Had they not... mehr anzeigen

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