Truths of Red and Black

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Truths of Red and Black
Entry for flash fiction. (exactly 1000 words)

He writes to his... lover?... a letter composed of two truths. a red truth; same as the color of passion and similar crap... and a black.

(if it's small, it's available in pdf..)

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Gelöschter User

but intriguing. The writing is very good, and the ideas and notions are something to ponder on when I read this again. Not sure what to make of this at first read.

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RevkenR

I was impressed with your writing. The truths are indeed true, although red and black sometimes get mixed together in my mind, as sometimes I feel that it is the women that claw at my soul. And I find that I have been saved by the beasts.

Loved your story.

Keep up the good work.

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RevkenR

I was impressed with your writing. The truths are indeed true, although red and black sometimes get mixed together in my mind, as sometimes I feel that it is the women that claw at my soul. And I find that I have been saved by the beasts.

Loved your story.

Keep up the good work.

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RevkenR

I was impressed with your writing. The truths are indeed true, although red and black sometimes get mixed together in my mind, as sometimes I feel that it is the women that claw at my soul. And I find that I have been saved by the beasts.

Loved your story.

Keep up the good work.

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RevkenR

I was impressed with your writing. The truths are indeed true, although red and black sometimes get mixed together in my mind, as sometimes I feel that it is the women that claw at my soul. And I find that I have been saved by the beasts.

Loved your story.

Keep up the good work.

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lazarus67

I got smart and saved it to my tablet...now, I was able to read it clearly. And glad I did. You have a great imagination, and I like the style you used here.
Voted.

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Gelöschter User

I have to say, i did skim through it at first and didn't like the way it was written. But after I started reading it, I knew that this style befits the style of your writing.

I enjoyed it immensely. Could picture your character writing this letter, scared and flustered, by what he encountered. Well done and good luck.

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angamonkey

Well thank you sir for this read. I am going mad since I am stuck at home due to the hurricane. The visuals such as the page colors and the fonts added a lot to the atmosphere of reading this. That was a clever idea.

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