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honestly i usually dont write these kinds of books i just got the idead this morning and i thought what the hell , i also dont really fix all the content and punctuation till i finish the book i have somone else do it for me . But thank you guys for you feedback

if i were you, i'd read over the content and edit it. add more detail, use more punctuation, and elaborate. for example.. maybe explain what's going on in blakes head as he finds maddison, or as he's chasing down her attacker, etc.

it was a good book but u should make it a little bit more suspicious