BookRix

(ᵔᴥᵔ) ⇝ ＷＷＷ.ＤＡＴＥ４ＦＵＱ.ＣＯＭ?_ebook-jon-kelley-what-a-wonderful-world

I like how he always travels around and how the end is sort of like mysterious

homerunreynolds

This was pretty cool! I definitely see alot of you in your writing. ^_^ Great job and good luck!

kinda has a mixed feel of 1984,breakfast of champions and metamorphosis... )

I enjoyed it! At times I felt it a bit hard to follow but then I could get back it to the story line. All in all Good work!! =)

Jon, I very much liked ur story. You could have combined a lot of sentences so it doesnt sound repetitive with word usage and there were a few grammatical errors but all-in-all, great story.

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it!

Loved the story and it brought memories. maybe I traveled back when i read it!./joeparente

Thank you for participating in our
fiction writing contest "My Best Fiction".

______
BookRix - your place to read, write and
network free literature on the Internet.