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I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.

like ligit sooo good loved it!!!!

like ligit sooo good loved it!!!!

''Yes ,little lady ,could I help you?''
nice little story
you got my vote

Hi John!
I enjoyed reading your story. The title and description caught my eye, it's a story I can definitely relate to. Although it was short and ended a little abruptly, I think it was developed very well. The dialogue and characters were believable. I really feel bad for the homeless guy, I was kind of hoping she'd give him her $2, ha ha.

Good luck in the contest. And if you want, you can check out my story "paint peels from broken walls."

:) Amber

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian