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I can sense the emotion in the dialogue and I can see the main character speaking to his brother as he is healing...the main character seems numb to it all but he has accepted what has happened and is trying to do what he can to provide some comfort...
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Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Rain Stories".
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Thanks for those comments, Tariq. Much appreciated.