I wholeheartedly agree with everyone on this one. It was beautiful and the last line is my favorite "and God smiled". Wonderful!
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A little late for a Christmas story, but nonetheless...
I loved it! I loved the ending- totally took me by surprise. Writing is as well-done as ever. I figured out the identity of Joshua as soon as you said his full name (and thus the shot-taking scene amused me greatly). Way to go. :)
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Your stories possess some quality that is so professional and polished. Maybe it's the dialogue. It flows so well. You deliver your ides so well.
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A perfect Christmas treat. Heart-warmimng, sincere, touching and beautifully done. Sir you are a master at your craft. Deep thinking but light and airy as the sun rises on me this morning. Very, very nice.
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I really liked it. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have a great Christmas.
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Second chances are for those who deserve it, and your character certainly did. A fabulous story about the true meaning of the holidays...
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Although, I am not much for romance stories, it was nicely written. Good Job!
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This was the best story I have read in such a long time! It was a heartwarming, delightful story about love, life and what the true meaning of Christmas should be about. For someone your age you write very well too. Great job J.C.!
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very nice