BookRix

I can't figure out where in your twisted writers mind you came up with this one! Brilliant.

Love the irony of this story- indeed, winning isn't everything! I also liked how you showed Roger to not be the man Amy thought he was. Brilliant!

short, sad and dark, but one I enjoyed. I would have love for you to drag it out more, but in the end, you did a great job yet again.

Review - I've learned that you, as a writer, love story and plot twists. You've not failed to give a dark twist to this story. Though it is simply my humble opinion as a reader, I feel you could have stretched or fleshed this story out just a tad bit more.
Otherwise, as always, love your style and the over all story/moral. Wonderful job. Robynn

...but in a good way. Your mind is a little dark, but I like it. This is horrible and wonderful all at once. Very creative and well written. "So much for being a winner" almost doesn't even sum this up. This is worth reading more than once.

Yes, the name in the blurb is wrong. You have another, very sad, heart wrenching, winner.

Two teeeeeeny tiny things: 1 - missing persons reports cannot be filed for 24 hours. I feel silly pointing it out - but I'm a true crime nut. Can't help it.

2 - You refer to the character as "Becky" in your blurb, but the characters name is Amy. I think that's because Becky is the character in Save the Salmon, no? I'm reading that next... ;)

Those two things aside.. it's awesome.