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Impeccable!

A very tasteful romantic indite...I loved it! You're an intriguing writer, this is my second read of yours and it was Fantastic! I've added this one to my favorites as well. :)

Classy little story.

Well written as always, but not one of my personal favorites. Nothing to due with your craft just the subject matter. I hate saying anything negative! Especially to you.

Not the expected - that's what makes it such a good read - that is, along with the setting and characters that make you believe you are there!

Flawless, captivating, atmospheric, I could almost hear background music throughout - incredible writing. Your stories (and this one is no exception) always make me go, "Wow!" There are so many stories out there that start like this, but then degrade into a tale of murder or horror, or something just plain weird. Not this. The complex simplicity of the heart is laid out beautifully, making this one of the most appealing stories I've read in a long time.

Having read the shorter version I can honestly say that it only got better.

You took a chance and made a good story even better. That's not easy. It's still one of my favorites

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I see this as a very interesting story about a man who changes his mind and heart. And a woman who is hurt, lonely and in need of friendship and comfort. Excellent writing!

this was a wonderful story about wanting a one night stand then finding out it was so much more! I think you could even expand on this to find out what happened after breakfast came too.