BookRix

An electic collection of laughter blended with nature images and everyday life. Twisters and such. The time you got into a fight with a kite! I will continue to read some more.

needs work

Ilike the first page short ryhme, then
line by line humorious at times about fishing, storms well done and graphic, about everyday life in different circumstances. Characters are well done as are scenes. I liked this rhymed book
and feel the wilderness and nature around us. My early years were spent on a dairy farm with lots of wooded areas
brooks streams amd an apple Orchard.
Thank you for a very rewarding read and good luck with this book.

Awesome writing :)

Your poems were really fun to read, made me smile all through out. Your style of writing short poems and some in sort of story-telling was really cool:)

Thanks for the read :)

Dear Joe,
I like the straightforward demotic tone of your poems. I think you tend to rhyme a little too stringently and this restricts your diction.My favourite poem is the title poem. Keep writing.

WHITE dOWN

I thought it was great because it made me think of happy memories and made me giggle a little bit.........Cool poems

Im young and noble but I say that this is pure poetry

good book

This style of poetry is pretty interesting and unique. I enjoy it!