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I dont have a car but i can tell from your poem how you dont like to drive at night, i do try to write poems but there not exactley my strong point but i do try do you think you could give me some feed back on mine??? :D

I liked the pace of the narrative. As a hero the narrator was a bit chauvinist and
boozy for me. The happy ending could be cut. The romance too is a bit contrived. I liked the idea of the plot.

It's awesome for me, as a noob to this sight, to find someone else who enjoys poetry. For a little while I've been under the impression that prose was the only acceptable form of literary fiction to post on this website, thank you for enlightening me and inspiring me to post some of my own poetry in the near future :)

Great job Joe, clear lines, great writing!
Greetings Anna!

ooooh yes, i know that kind of situation very well. GREAT WRITING!

What an accurate and great description of the challenges we face driving in the rain. It spoke to me personally as my vision is awful in the rain, at night. Clear, rythmical lines that flow effortlessly. Your words paint a clear identifiable picture.

I think you hit the nail on the head with this one. You have put into words what every driver thinks when they are driving at night in the rain!! The frustration, irritation, the way the wipers manipulate your mind and your vision. Great job! :)

Loved it an saved it.

Loved it an saved it.

The cadence is excellent. It is evocative, we all empathize.
Good work!