The Thing

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fools101
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The Thing

this story is about a 17 year old girl name Rose and she got to see something, that no one seen before, but their is other girl name Jess that also seen "The Thing" Too, They can't really describe it, Rose and Jess want to fine out what it is, do they catch it, or will they die or even maybe lucky to be alive...


  • Horror
  • 3217 Wörter
  • Ab 18 Jahren
  • 125
  • 13
  • Veröffentlichung: 07.12.2011
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fools101
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fools101

Hi!
Thank you I know i have to go in and fix some things sorry about that I just been busy!

~Jess~

marriah14
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marriah14

it is a good book but you need to work on your grammar it makes it difficult to read. but i like the book

oindrila
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oindrila

full of suspense but there were loads of grammatical error.Plot was good.!

katie121133
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katie121133

great plot but it needs alot of correction... you forget to use 's like for instance Mother's not Mother or comes instead of come... it's minor errors but still........iloveit!

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