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I like the way you used color in your descriptions of the characters. Autumn is my favorite time of the year. Great job with this sentimental little tale.
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This was really a sweet book. it's the perfect beginning of a friendship--and maybe more than that---for the main character.
I really enjoyed it!
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after re-reading a few times, i concluded that each episode is strong enough to stand on its own, and you managed to blend them into an even stronger story together.
good job.
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You have a definite gift for storytelling. I loved the innocence of this piece; the nice, nice upbeat ending.
I have to agree with crossways net on this one, however. Eliminating any of the three would weaken the overall "story arc", I think. But again, the images and conciseness are exceptional.
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Sweet coming of age story - well done! but still not sure if it fits the criteria of the contest...
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This IS so sweet....love it!
Only thing it needs is a vote.
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