Children of Flames

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Children of Flames
Lore has it, many years ago, the Kingdom of Euphoria was a beautiful and amazing place. The Kingdom followed through with its name and was paradise to many. The royalties were charming, outgoing people who always had the people’s best interest at heart. The grass was this and green, the trees large and healthy, the rivers and lakes sparkled and were so clear you could see to the bottom. Crime was an all time low. Euphoria was indeed heaven on earth. But, alas, things would not remain the same.

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James Gerard

The beginning a very good story. I like how you set up the plot for the continuing story at the end. I look forward to reading more.

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lazarus67

Apart from a few spelling and grammar errors, the story is solid...now, you just need to finish it. I know...it won't be easy. I'm going through that myself right now.

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Jnnfruvalle

Thank you! I have been struggling with it. Lack of inspiration sitting in a cubicle. Im going on a trip this weekend, I am hoping it will get the creative blood flowing.

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