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The beginning a very good story. I like how you set up the plot for the continuing story at the end. I look forward to reading more.
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Apart from a few spelling and grammar errors, the story is solid...now, you just need to finish it. I know...it won't be easy. I'm going through that myself right now.
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Jnnfruvalle
Thank you! I have been struggling with it. Lack of inspiration sitting in a cubicle. Im going on a trip this weekend, I am hoping it will get the creative blood flowing.
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